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Guest · Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 12:59 am Post subject: The Ballad Of Anakin Skywalker

Okay, so here's my poem about Star Wars. I hope you like it!

A long time ago, In a galaxy far, far away...
Anakin was created by the Force,
He was very good on the Pod Race course,
He went to become a Jedi,
After he told his mother, "Goodbye!"
At first Yoda didn't approve,
Only after the Seperatist move.
Obi-Wan became his master,
But Anakin only became a disaster.
Anakin fell in love with Padme,
And they got married one day.
After the Clone Wars started,
The Seperatists parted,
And the Empire was born!
Anakin was a Sith and Padme's heart was torn.
The Jedi Order was gone,
The Sith Lord's revenge was won.
But Anakin had twins!
So, does that mean that the Empire still wins?
The New Hope was with Leia and Luke.
And the Death Star exploded like a nuke!
The Chosen One defeated the Sith,
And then the Empire was just a myth.

So, what did you think? Try not to be too harsh because I know it's not perfect. Because I am only a beginner.

Guest · Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 8:10 am Post subject:

too short, not enough description and

Slayer · Guest

why not?

Guest · Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 9:18 am Post subject:

In poem and as a poet, he has the option of great freedom with facts. In a certain point of view, the Empire did die at Endor. Without an emperor, there can be no empire.

Guest · Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 1:47 am Post subject:

It came back..so not true

Slayer · Guest

But to come back it has to be defeated