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| Guest |
"That man"this is a story I wrote two weeks ago...http://www.starwarsepica.com.pe/thatman.htm it's pretty short, but I like it... any comments? =P |
| Aaron_Nichols |
It is a good story. There are only a few errors and the story line is really good. I would give it a 8/10 |
| Guest |
cool, thanks... although my english teacher gave me a 9.5 <.<...
what errors did you find? =O |
| Aaron_Nichols |
There were a few spelling errors, and you switched tenses in one of the lines....I dont know which one right now. |
| Guest |
there were no spelling errors according to my teacher.... >.> plus, I used the spell check... and the tense thing... uh... weird, maybe I made a mistake while transcripting it from paper to PC.... if you could tell me which sentence it is I could change it =D |
| Aaron_Nichols |
I am not seeing the tense thing now.....I must have said it wrong in my head, as I do that sometimes I know. I am sorry to worry you GG XD |
| Guest |
hahahah, okay, then my story deserves a 10, haha
jk... I just wanna see what the other members think of it, though |