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The Ballad Of Anakin SkywalkerOkay, so here's my poem about Star Wars. I hope you like it!
A long time ago, In a galaxy far, far away...
Anakin was created by the Force,
He was very good on the Pod Race course,
He went to become a Jedi,
After he told his mother, "Goodbye!"
At first Yoda didn't approve,
Only after the Seperatist move.
Obi-Wan became his master,
But Anakin only became a disaster.
Anakin fell in love with Padme,
And they got married one day.
After the Clone Wars started,
The Seperatists parted,
And the Empire was born!
Anakin was a Sith and Padme's heart was torn.
The Jedi Order was gone,
The Sith Lord's revenge was won.
But Anakin had twins!
So, does that mean that the Empire still wins?
The New Hope was with Leia and Luke.
And the Death Star exploded like a nuke!
The Chosen One defeated the Sith,
And then the Empire was just a myth.
So, what did you think? Try not to be too harsh because I know it's not perfect. Because I am only a beginner.
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too short, not enough description and
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And then the Empire was just a myth |
not true
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why not?
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In poem and as a poet, he has the option of great freedom with facts. In a certain point of view, the Empire did die at Endor. Without an emperor, there can be no empire.
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It came back..so not true
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But to come back it has to be defeated
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